Twinkling Starz

Aha! You catually called me a name other than twinkling person.

Wonderfully written, i like the musical pace of it. I really like it, good work. ;) -*Twinkles

With Santa? And a Fairy?

LOL very funny! I loved the obese blob of scales line, that made me laugh out loud. Much different than your Martyr poem. Very much different.

Good idea.

Sharp eye, Poppi.

Lol, no.

You can say that again. :)

Much better. ;)

Errr, sorry. It's a good comment. This was greatly written, and I really liked the last line, it wrapped up the poem pretty well. Well done, good work.

It's okay, I understand how you feel, somedays I'm grumpy and snap at absolutley nothing. ;)

Very good imagery. I could see everything in my mind, this was wonderful. I really liked the last line it closed it up so well. Well done. -*Twinkles

Yes, I didn't like the "The" in the beginning, it kinda gets on your nerves. Very nice, I really liked it. Wonderful work. -*Twinkles

Great work! I really liked this. I can't see anything wrong with it.

Full of feeling and you make the reader feel sorry for you. I'm sorry if this poem is true...